I ran to a witchy old house. Now the lion was lost! Suddenly, I appeared to be in a strange place full of mysterious faces… A huge eye was spying on a tiny boy with a TV head. I spotted a black eye and looked straight in it, then into another one and so on. There were curved and square faces…
“Where am I?” I murmured.
I tried to find my way back, but I couldn’t! Everything started to move
“Look up!” called the eyes of the moving walls. Wind started coming out. Suddenly, I was in my sunny garden.
“Where am I?” I murmured.
I tried to find my way back, but I couldn’t! Everything started to move
“Look up!” called the eyes of the moving walls. Wind started coming out. Suddenly, I was in my sunny garden.
Great, Julia!
ReplyDeleteYou've got action, description and speech - and a dream-like story!
I wonder what happened to the lion?
I agree with Mr Gregg - Now I have lots of questions about how the story will resolve! Well done.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Mr Gregg - Now I have lots of questions about how the story will resolve! Well done.
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